In Desiree Nippard’s “An Early Thaw,” the reader witnesses a group of schoolchildren sending lanterns into the sky while playing a send-off tune on recorders. In this ceremony for the deceased, “[y]ou could hear every pause for breath, every off note from the shifting of small fingers as we all allowed the melody to seep into our souls.” (54) This coastal town is grieving, and the narrator reveals the cause with deep sensory descriptions that guide the reader with the right amount of grace and gentleness.
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Seasonal Update: What has Pauline Shen been up to? What can we expect to see from her next?
Season Summary: Autumn 2023
- My visual piece “Word” was released in Cool Beans Lit’s autumn 2023 issue.
- Multiple visual pieces were released with Quibble’s October 2023 issue. See my Updates page for the full list with links.
- New stuff! I’ve begun posting interviews on my blog. I am delighted to partner with editors, writers, and publishers to bring you an insider scoop on what’s going on in the industry. These posts will continue through the new year. Make sure you subscribe to stay up to date.
Updates & Work in Progress: Winter 2023-24
- My short fiction “How to Make a Pet Rock” is scheduled for a spring 2024 release with The Bookends Review. Keep your eye on my Updates page or Twitter for the official announcement with a link where you can read the story.
- “Glycerine” is set to reprint with Blank Spaces Magazine’s March 2024 issue. You can pre-order your copy here. I am excited to see this in print once again—it is a favourite.
- I will be spending more time writing my work-in-progress this season. You can expect some incremental updates through late winter and into spring 2024.
What I’m Reading: Winter 2023-24

- I finished Elizabeth Hay’s “Snow Road Station” and anticipate a likely third installation in this series. Have you read “Snow Road Station” yet? Do you read Elizabeth Hay’s books? Leave a comment to let me know your thoughts.
- As part of my market research, I’ve been reading some romantic comedy bestsellers. One that stood out to me as having perfected the formula is “The Hating Game” by Sally Thorne. If you’ve read any of her books, please start the discussion in the comments section of this post. I’d like to know what you have to say.
- For the winter, I’ll be continuing market research as well as reading old classics—some for the first time ever. At present, I’m binge-reading C.S. Lewis’ Chronicles of Narnia. “The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe” is the first book of this series. I found the boxed set at my local bookstore, and so have decided to read the full chronicles. Have you read it? As a youth? Or perhaps as an adult? Let me know.
And that’s it. Enjoy winter. Please share your comments below. Stay tuned for my next blog post. Wanna get it in your email inbox? Subscribe to stay informed of my newest articles, story reviews, updates, and more.
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Wretched Creature. Commentary on Jennifer Milne’s “Gravy Boat Genie”
Writing a story that revolves around an unlikable, nay despicable, protagonist is a bold move. The classic example is Scrooge in Charles Dickens’ “A Christmas Carol.” However, that protagonist resolves to change by seeing the error of his ways. In Jennifer Milne’s “Gravy Boat Genie,” our protagonist, who serves as narrator, obtains absolution by a different means.
Continue reading “Wretched Creature. Commentary on Jennifer Milne’s “Gravy Boat Genie””Interview with Garrett Souliere
In this post, we’ll be hearing from Garrett Souliere, Editor/Founder of Quibble Literary Journal. Garrett tells us the story behind Quibble’s founding, describes how the journal has and continues to evolve, and shares inspiring words that every budding writer should know.
When you first founded Quibble, what was the main driving factor that motivated you to launch this independent magazine?
Continue reading “Interview with Garrett Souliere”Time Management – How to PART THREE
How do you manage your time as a freelance writer? PART THREE
In PART ONE of this topic, we established that managing activities is only one part of the equation. In PART TWO, I introduced the crucial element of scheduling in a way that feeds motivation rather than increase the likelihood of burnout. In this post, I’ll describe the final three (out of five total) techniques that work for me at the present time. These are:
Continue reading “Time Management – How to PART THREE”Time Management – How to PART TWO
How do you manage your time as a freelance writer? PART TWO
In PART ONE of this topic, we established that managing activities is only one part of the equation. What’s crucial is to schedule them in a way that feeds motivation rather than increase the likelihood of burnout. So in this post, I’ll describe the first two of five total techniques that work for me at the present time. If you see something here that you can emulate, great! I hope it works for you as well.
Five techniques that ensure I stay on track with my freelance career:
Continue reading “Time Management – How to PART TWO”Home is Where the Heart is. Commentary on Abigail Oswald’s “Camp for Sad Girls”
It’s that overpowering, unshakable feeling that disrupts any possible elation. Even when you’re in the brightest, most sensory-stimulating, and enriching place, homesickness sets in. Oh, summer camp. How we hate to love you. But we all do.
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How do you manage your time as a freelance writer? PART ONE
When I was young, I used to fantasize about having a remote control that could pause time and freeze everyone (except me) in place. I’d imagine all the things I could do while the passage of time was on hold. Of course, an added advantage was having everyone else paused along with it. There’d be quiet and stillness as well as solitude. Think of all the books I could finish. Imagine all the projects I could get done. Oh, and all the sleeping-in and loafing about I could do instead of rushing around.
Continue reading “Time Management – How to PART ONE”And Then There Were Three. Commentary on Miranda Manzano’s “Four Things”
Seen, heard, and known. It’s all anyone wants. Meet Stacey. Or, rather, come see the world through her eyes. She’s observing human nature unfold before her whilst working a fast food cashier job. Isn’t that the most likely place to see the very best and worst of humanity—on the front lines? In this case, it’s a Taco Bell.
Continue reading “And Then There Were Three. Commentary on Miranda Manzano’s “Four Things””Seasonal Update: What has Pauline Shen been up to? What can we expect to see from her next?
Season Summary: Summer 2023
- My visual piece “Eye” was released with Quibble’s Snake Eyes issue in August.
- You can find my artwork “Word” in Cool Beans Lit’s Autumn 2023 issue.
- New posts are up on my blog. You can continue to expect a series of short fiction reviews, posts on writing craft, updates and more!
Updates & Work in Progress: Autumn 2023
- I am shaping my brand and messaging. You will notice gradual changes on my website, blog, and Twitter account.
- With a few scene tweaks, I’ve pulled my manuscript out of the YA category and back into the realm of millennial fiction. Really, the adult characters took the story in a new direction all on their own. You will see fewer updates from me this season. I am pulling-back on writing time to conduct additional market research.
- I’m looking to add more content in video form. I’ve set-up a Rumble account and am deciding whether to use YouTube. Please comment with your recommendations.
What I’m Reading: Autumn 2023

- I spent the summer reading Jules Verne. If you only read one of his stories, I recommend “From the Earth to the Moon,” as it is unexpectedly humorous. In addition to having been ahead of its time, the characterization is excellent and contains social commentary on human behavior that is applicable to the present day.
- Speaking of translated works, I also re-read Gaston Leroux’s “The Phantom of the Opera.” I first read it in seventh grade. Reading it later in life is a far different experience. I appreciate how everything surrounding the mystery of this Opera Ghost comes to a climax, not only with Raoul searching for his love Christine, but as the culmination of all the foul play that effects the new managers, the stage hands, and others. This isn’t the semi-cute lovesick phantom characterized in Andrew Lloyd Webber’s musical of the same name. He is 100% bad guy. Read it for yourself and see what I mean.
- I am reading Elizabeth Hay’s “Snow Road Station.” This is a sequel to “His Whole Life,” although it isn’t specifically advertised as such. The narrative follows Lulu Blake who, in the previous book, was a supporting character grappling with her unstitched relationship with her brother, Guy, while also attempting to get her alcoholism under control. In “Snow Road Station,” we see Lulu confronting the reality of childlessness as she progresses from middle-age into her sixties. You see, while death is a certainty in life, motherhood is not. Hay captures this tragic realization in a well-woven tale of love and friendship.
And that’s it. Enjoy autumn. Please share your comments below. Stay tuned for my next blog post. Wanna get it in your email inbox? Subscribe to stay informed of my newest articles, story reviews, updates, and more.
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