It’s that overpowering, unshakable feeling that disrupts any possible elation. Even when you’re in the brightest, most sensory-stimulating, and enriching place, homesickness sets in. Oh, summer camp. How we hate to love you. But we all do.
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Time Management – How to PART ONE
How do you manage your time as a freelance writer? PART ONE
When I was young, I used to fantasize about having a remote control that could pause time and freeze everyone (except me) in place. I’d imagine all the things I could do while the passage of time was on hold. Of course, an added advantage was having everyone else paused along with it. There’d be quiet and stillness as well as solitude. Think of all the books I could finish. Imagine all the projects I could get done. Oh, and all the sleeping-in and loafing about I could do instead of rushing around.
Continue reading “Time Management – How to PART ONE”And Then There Were Three. Commentary on Miranda Manzano’s “Four Things”
Seen, heard, and known. It’s all anyone wants. Meet Stacey. Or, rather, come see the world through her eyes. She’s observing human nature unfold before her whilst working a fast food cashier job. Isn’t that the most likely place to see the very best and worst of humanity—on the front lines? In this case, it’s a Taco Bell.
Continue reading “And Then There Were Three. Commentary on Miranda Manzano’s “Four Things””Seasonal Update: What has Pauline Shen been up to? What can we expect to see from her next?
Season Summary: Summer 2023
- My visual piece “Eye” was released with Quibble’s Snake Eyes issue in August.
- You can find my artwork “Word” in Cool Beans Lit’s Autumn 2023 issue.
- New posts are up on my blog. You can continue to expect a series of short fiction reviews, posts on writing craft, updates and more!
Updates & Work in Progress: Autumn 2023
- I am shaping my brand and messaging. You will notice gradual changes on my website, blog, and Twitter account.
- With a few scene tweaks, I’ve pulled my manuscript out of the YA category and back into the realm of millennial fiction. Really, the adult characters took the story in a new direction all on their own. You will see fewer updates from me this season. I am pulling-back on writing time to conduct additional market research.
- I’m looking to add more content in video form. I’ve set-up a Rumble account and am deciding whether to use YouTube. Please comment with your recommendations.
What I’m Reading: Autumn 2023

- I spent the summer reading Jules Verne. If you only read one of his stories, I recommend “From the Earth to the Moon,” as it is unexpectedly humorous. In addition to having been ahead of its time, the characterization is excellent and contains social commentary on human behavior that is applicable to the present day.
- Speaking of translated works, I also re-read Gaston Leroux’s “The Phantom of the Opera.” I first read it in seventh grade. Reading it later in life is a far different experience. I appreciate how everything surrounding the mystery of this Opera Ghost comes to a climax, not only with Raoul searching for his love Christine, but as the culmination of all the foul play that effects the new managers, the stage hands, and others. This isn’t the semi-cute lovesick phantom characterized in Andrew Lloyd Webber’s musical of the same name. He is 100% bad guy. Read it for yourself and see what I mean.
- I am reading Elizabeth Hay’s “Snow Road Station.” This is a sequel to “His Whole Life,” although it isn’t specifically advertised as such. The narrative follows Lulu Blake who, in the previous book, was a supporting character grappling with her unstitched relationship with her brother, Guy, while also attempting to get her alcoholism under control. In “Snow Road Station,” we see Lulu confronting the reality of childlessness as she progresses from middle-age into her sixties. You see, while death is a certainty in life, motherhood is not. Hay captures this tragic realization in a well-woven tale of love and friendship.
And that’s it. Enjoy autumn. Please share your comments below. Stay tuned for my next blog post. Wanna get it in your email inbox? Subscribe to stay informed of my newest articles, story reviews, updates, and more.
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Agree to Disagree. A Commentary on Ken Rogers’s “Inalienable Rights”
Meet Connie. She’s a 26-year-old still coming into her own. In this Ken Rogers piece, we have two stories colliding; or rather, we catch a glimpse into Connie’s family life while observing her navigate parallel adversity in the wider world. What better way to showcase the inner struggle of latent development than plopping the protagonist into a political campaign—specifically, as a congressional campaign volunteer—and making her canvass on behalf of an underdog. Engaging with the public as part of an election campaign is guaranteed to coax even the smallest self-doubt into consciousness.
Continue reading “Agree to Disagree. A Commentary on Ken Rogers’s “Inalienable Rights””Help Wanted: Stories to Review. Finding Beauty in Truth with Storytelling.
You may have noticed the short story reviews popping up on my blog. Yes, you are welcome to add suggestions for stories. If you’re recommending a story for me to review, please consider these guidelines first.
Continue reading “Help Wanted: Stories to Review. Finding Beauty in Truth with Storytelling.”Sinning Under Pressure. A Commentary on Leigh Rastivo’s “One Time in Hell”
Those who were raised Catholic and endured catechism as a child may recognize the setting. A series of primary graders are waiting, “in a long line of wee sinners—the queue looped twice round the nave and aisles of our church.” However, readers who do not have similar memories to draw upon can still empathize with the inter- and intra-personal struggles presented here vis-à-vis our protagonist, eight year old Mary Faith Dennison. In this fictional tale, Leigh Rastivo writes the story through Mary’s eyes, giving the audience the full run-down of her thoughts, worries, and obsessions. What she reveals is the breakdown of communication between adults and children—especially in areas that matter most. Sound familiar? Disconnect between fellow humans is indeed a universal theme. And a poignant one at that.
Continue reading “Sinning Under Pressure. A Commentary on Leigh Rastivo’s “One Time in Hell””Would it Smell as Sweet? A Commentary on Ace Baker’s “Not Julie… Yet”
Meet Julianna, a highly self-conscious and more-than-slightly-awkward high school student looking for love. It’s a story that may at first seem cliché, particularly as the narrative scaffolds on Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet while also containing Palahniuk-style rules that serve as calls to action and reflections of lessons learned. However, writer Ace Baker has succeeded in crafting a tale that brings the reader inside Julianna’s world, capturing the reader’s attention and heart in a way that is fresh and exciting.
Continue reading “Would it Smell as Sweet? A Commentary on Ace Baker’s “Not Julie… Yet””Poverty or Clarity? A Tax Return that Delivers. Commentary on Cadence Mandybura’s “Regarding Line 25600 of Your Income Tax Return”
It’s Sunday morning and there’s a knock at the door. Who else would it be but two representatives of the Canada Revenue Agency. Yesterday, you see, was the tax filing deadline. This morning, however, is no routine follow-up. In “Regarding Line 25600 of Your Income Tax Return,” Cadence Mandybura pulls the reader into a scene reminiscent of the liver donor segment from Monty Python’s The Meaning of Life. It’s wacky. It’s zany. But it’s also poignant in presenting a man’s deep struggle with a different sort of tax—that on the heart.
Continue reading “Poverty or Clarity? A Tax Return that Delivers. Commentary on Cadence Mandybura’s “Regarding Line 25600 of Your Income Tax Return””Seasonal Update: What has Pauline Shen been up to? What can we expect to see from her next?
Season Summary: Spring 2023
- My short story “Jubilee” appeared in print with the March issue of Blank Spaces Magazine
- I photographed a dopping of common mergansers that The Signpost [Dorchester] ran in April
- Blank Spaces Magazine posted an author interview with me: Coffee Chat
- Quibble Lit featured my photographs “Pink Tulip,” and “Female Cardinal” alongside audio poems in Issue 10
Updates & Work in Progress: Summer 2023
- My blog is up and running. You can expect a series of short fiction reviews, posts on writing craft, updates and more! Comments are welcome.
- I’m working on a manuscript that will likely be marketed as YA fiction. My intended readership is millennials, but the story is moving in a direction of its own. We’ll discover what these characters have in store for this plot.
- I am looking to acquire a video capture & edit program in order to add more content in video form. Please let me know if you have a recommendation.
What I’m Reading: Summer 2023
- I’ve just finished Jane Friedman’s The Business of Being a Writer which has led me to add Peter Ginna’s What editors do: the art, craft, and business of book editing to my summer reading list. It’s research, really, but still counts.
- I am continuing the Simon & Schuster version of The Bible: Designed to be Read as Living Literature. It’s the KJV presented chronologically in prose form (for the most part) so that it can be read like a novel. That doesn’t mean that I’m binge-reading it, though.
- Elizabeth Hay’s new book Snow Road Station is on my list!
And that’s it. Have a great summer. Please share your comments below. Stay tuned for my next blog post. Wanna get it in your email inbox? Subscribe to stay informed of my newest articles, story reviews, updates, and more.
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